In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?
Nowadays, the number of criminal acts and violations in many societies is on the increase. It is argued that the poverty, unemployment and lack of education are the main reasons for this issue. Governments should take steps to solve this intricate problem.
There are many possible causes for the increasing amount of crime in each society. Firstly, some people have no other choice for making a living since they do not have vocation and enough education to find an appropriate job. Secondly, adolescents are under the peer pressure which will lead to juvenile delinquency in society. Furthermore, young children chose their role models among the celebrities who entice them using drugs or abandon their families in seek of better life opportunities. Finally, prisons are the places in which offenders will learn a variety of criminal acts from other prisoners and this will have an adverse effect on the criminals and will cause more violations.
Governments should tackle this problem by providing more job opportunities. A salient example of this is Germany that could diminish the crime rate up to 30% in 2008 by introducing new jobs for young people. Furthermore, prisons should add more vocational trainings and rehabilitation services to their schedule which will help prisoners find better jobs in the future when they release into society. Besides, celebrities should be more concerned about their behavior as they are role models in society and are in the public eye.
In conclusion, the most crucial reasons for committing a crime are celebrities’ misbehavior, lack of job opportunities and education that can change a person into a criminal. Government should solve the problem by providing the residents of rural and urban areas with better social welfare.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29225352113 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89014590711 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580985915493 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2418329264 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.357142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102743414668 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405249151488 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678742600755 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616662471934 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306861160401 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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