In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent.
why do you think this is and what can be done about it?
Nowadays, crime is increasing at an alarming rate and it has become a global phenomena. The root causes of this are poverty, unemployment and drug abuse. The practical solution is to educate young people about the consequences, bring strict laws and give more job opportunities.
Firstly, a major part of the population is unemployed and poor. they have to struggle to fulfill their daily basic needs as well. unemployment leaves them no choice to act violently to get bread and butter for their family. Secondly, drug abuse has been increasing in the society. it has become easier to get different types of narcotic substances which affect the senses to act uncontrollably. people under the influence of these drugs often do heinous crimes. For instance, in the last decade crime rate in Delhi has increased drastically due to the increase in drug substances in the market.
To tackle these problems new jobs must be provided. that is to say that when employed, people can buy basic products for their family and provide better education to the young ones. Enforcing strict laws is another feasible solution, as people tends to avoid criminal activities when even a small illegal act can get you harsh punishment. For instance, in Saudi Arabia punishment for stealing is chopping hands in front of a large audience which brings fear in the people and they avoid indulging in offences. In addition, government can also start campaigns to educate people about drug abuses and its adverse effects on mental and physical health.
To recapitulate, criminal acts are growing globally due to an increase in narcotic drugs in the market and poor people still struggling to fulfill basic needs. The predicament can be improved by giving jobs to jobless people and providing counseling to drug abusers. Furthermore, strict laws should be implemented against even small crimes which will make people avoid indulging in illegal activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, in addition, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15873015873 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74751588483 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8856303584 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2777777778 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163444532247 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05028632897 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409035721836 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108923570609 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350721661099 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.