Science will soon make people live up to 100 or even 200 years. Some believe this is a good thing while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, we are able to develop medicines for most of the life threatening desieases as a result human life expectency has increased and people often believe that in the future we would be able to live 100 to 200 years. Although some would argue that increased lifespan will help people become more satisfied and loved, others think that it will cause an increase in the population of old people and put extra burden on the natural resources and I agree.
Certainly, people will welcome an increase in their lifespan and families will be delighted to spend extra years with their loved ones.In other words, future generation will be able to spend more time with their grand parents. In addition, some people also believe that elders are more experineced and they have better capabilities of taking diplomatic decisions. For instance, experienced persons are given priorty for the position of a prime minister and so far in the history of independent India we have not seen any young prime minisiter.
On the other hand, it is often argued that increase in life expectency will put more burden on the earth. That is to say that if the rate of death decareases there will be an increase in the rate at which population is growing. To full the needs of this increased population more resouces will be required. In my opinion, we are already at the point where earth will not be able to sustain life even if there is a slight percentage of increase in the population of the world. For instance, for ceturies life expectency was 45 to 50 years and population had managed to grow to 2 billions till the start of the 20th century, but by the 1950's life expectency grew to 70 years and in just 50 years world population grew up to 7.2 billions. Ever depleating predicament of earth will not be able to sustain life beyond this point.
In conclusion, increase in the lifespan will bring joys to the families, however, it will increase the population and nature will have to pay the cost. In no time, it will become impossible to produce goods for such a number of people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7032967033 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55153382106 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486263736264 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.1109427957 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.692307692 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157485625955 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661007601381 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034053224416 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109030425658 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309671877432 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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