In many countries, new houses are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside.
Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about them?
The massive increase in the population has created the shortage of dwelling places in urban areas and the vacant spaces for the construction of homes are only available in the rural parts. Some people assert that the protection of the countryside from urban utilization is quite essential. I strongly support the view and in my opinion, the countryside is the most important place for any civilization because it is where the majority of food grow to feed people in the cities and through which environmental pollution is balanced.
Primarily, developing suburbs in agricultural areas might have egregious consequences for the cities. In other words, the construction of new buildings or industries obligates the farmers to move to other places or to leave agricultural practices. Consequently, this can affect the export of wheat and rice to cities, as a result, the price of these products become extremely high. For example, the agricultural association of Punjab stated that due to urbanization, 40% downfall in agriculture export has been observed in the last ten years which has increased the prices of paddy to 10%.
Secondly, areas in the countryside are the sources of a clean and healthy environment as these areas are mostly covered with trees and plants. Furthermore, deforestation done to build new places can further exaggerate environmental pollution. To exemplify, the construction of Vatika apartments in the outskirts of Haryana has caused the destruction of 30% of the entire vegetation of the area.
In conclusion, it can be stated that the preservation of the countryside is vital in order to have a healthy environment and adequate food production. Therefore, using this space for building new living spaces might create consequences for nature and to individual. In the near future, to alleviate the problem of space for building homes, some scientific schemes need to be followed, instead of consuming the productive countryside lands.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33762057878 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13181629105 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549839228296 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7660432273 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.692307692 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218455492818 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723323197459 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059452544416 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124861983022 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058889119456 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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