In many countries, people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing.
Why is this the case? Is this a positive or negative development?
Presently, there is a trend all round the world to switch from traditional to western style clothes. The main reason for this is globalization, which is neither bad nor good and leads to lack of diversity.
As we know, the modern world has become closer in terms of cultural penetration and interconnected economies of different countries, which inevitably influence local fashion. Foreign advertisement and import of goods make it appealing for locals to purchase foreign clothes, especially western one. Additionally, such clothes as jeans are not only fashionable but also highly practical and comfortable. For example, in some countries in Asia men used to wear Sarong, which is basically a long piece of clothing and today many of them prefer wearing jeans as it is more convenient.
In my opinion, even though the trend mentioned above leads to less variety in people’s outfits, I believe it has its own merits. First, western-based items as a rule are cheaper than conventional dressing and can be manufactured and sold in different parts of the world. Meanwhile, traditional clothing is produced using a semi-handicraft method and can be sold only on local markets as traditional dressing is not popular globally. In addition, wide-spread western-style garments bring the general public a sense of equality as it was noticed that this kind of dressing increases the feeling of fitting in among persons wearing them.
In conclusion, the reason behind the latest fashion trends is a process of growing global interdependence of economies, traditions, population and inter-border trades. In general, it can be considered as advantageous because similar styles in outlook facilitate equality among the nations and stimulate foreign trades.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in general, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41240875912 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15721276355 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638686131387 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5624381188 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.583333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8333333333 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196508763305 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621161377899 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05503063509 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981970865953 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620779329053 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.