Some people say it is a waste of time to plan for future. It is more important to focus on present. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, a lot for people spend their time planning and setting goals, while there are those who consider that making plans for the future is time-consuming and it is essential to concentrate on the present. I totally agree that the current moment is more important because the life is happening right now and the future is a variable, which can never happen at all.
First, living in the present improves your focus and your awareness of opportunities, which otherwise you would have missed. This is because thinking about what is going to happen in the future takes a person away from the present and people do not realize that changes are possible only at the current moment. For instance, at one of the moments of desperation I was thinking about my future without my ex-boyfriend that almost missed a chance to go abroad for post-graduation course in remote sensing. Luckily, my best friend brought me back to the reality, I had applied for the course, and I was able to attend it.
Second reason why I assume the present is important is that the power for creating a better future is contained in the present moment. Actually, human beings create a good future by creating a good present. Focusing on the present also helps an individual calm their minds, which helps them finally to use their time more efficiently. As a result, it has direct effect on the future because brings a positive outcome and gets things done. While planning without immediate actions just stays in a stage of a project being futile activity. For example, plenty of people write their new year’s resolutions and never accomplish them.
In conclusion, I absolutely agree that perspective plans are useless and the better way is focusing on the present life because it is only time when a person can explore out coming opportunities and really create something real and change their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 620, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he course, and I was able to attend it. Second reason why I assume the present i...
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Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... positive outcome and gets things done. While planning without immediate actions just...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, if, really, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.890625 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6383570142 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559375 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4799450482 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.384615385 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345144125436 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108033284498 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640456477001 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204843189413 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639165720458 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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