In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both the viewpoints and give your opinion.
In today's generation with the increase in competition and demanding nature of company’s employees are being paid with good salaries. While there are people who hold a popular belief that giving extremely high package to the individual should be avoided by the government, others think that it is not wrong to provide competitive wage to the employee. As both viewpoints have merits, I tend to believe that minimum and maximum wage should be fixed by higher authorities after considering responsibilities of different jobs.
Those who advocate this providing salary is beneficial for nation, argue that it increases the satisfaction level of people and then they give their 100% to do the job. To exemplify, Last year one of the company in Toronto did a survey and find that people are still not satisfy with their salary, although that company provides a quite competitive wage as compared to other rivals that results in dissatisfaction of the employees. So, salary is the major factor which contributes in the happiness of workforce and is a positive sign for the country.
Others, however, myself included, do not support this prominent belief. Leaders of the country should fix a starting wage and the maximum wage. Of course, one should be paid higher according to the ability, skills and the level of job difficulty. Variation should not be very high, such as a general labor worker is being paid 14$ per hour and on the other hand an engineer is paid 80-90$ per hour. This inequality lead to the comparison in between people and may give birth to so many health-related issues such as depression and anxiety among low income level people.
In conclusion, it will be wrong to neglect any of the viewpoints as both the statements are true as such, and both have their own benefits. The optimal solution would be to pay according to the skills and responsibilities required to complete that particular job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$14'.
Suggestion: $14
...as a general labor worker is being paid 14$ per hour and on the other hand an engin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, then, while, in conclusion, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97507788162 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83678687758 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566978193146 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.812474795 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.846153846 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232988188341 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074185105928 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500176759185 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125985628251 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461581425245 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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