In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, people in many counties have very different salaries. One can earn 1000$ per month and another 100000$. Many people believe that it is benefitial for the country while others are used to think that governments have to make a certain level of allowed salaries. Personally, I do believe that both opinions have its pros and cons but I think that it would be better if people had an opportunity to earn different salaries.
Concerning the first opinion about use for the country I am partially agree. Firstly, if companies gives an opportunity to earn well, people works harder to get this sallary. In addition, people all over the world will come to this contry to work which will deffinetly influence on the development of the country. Thirdly, salaries cannot be equal or have a certain limit because some jobs are more difficult, stressful, dangerous and take much more time than others. For illustrating my point we can take surgeon and seller. Surgeon have to take the responsibility for his patient, spend a lot of time in operating room sometimes not seing their family and friends. Whilst sellers just reccomend items, count money and help clients. So, it will not be honest to give them both equal salaries.
Regarding the beneficial side of certain level of earnings I also can see few advantades. The main plus is that all people will be equal and each lobor will be evaluated. What is more, young adults will chose a profession they like rather than the one which brings more money. So, we will have more specialists in certain spheres.
To sum up, both those oppinions have its advantages,. So, I do believe that with having balance of both these ideas our society could become more hard-workind, ambitious and interested in their profession.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: agreed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, third, thirdly, well, while, i think, in addition, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62420146584 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1279204545 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8333333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237316396006 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715564210616 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764880921291 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136216004502 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838900041572 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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