In many countries today people are choosing to have fewer children. WHY is this the case? WHAT are the effects of this trend on society?
Most families today opt to have fewer children than before. In this essay I will discuss some reasons of this trend as well as its impact on the society.
Firstly it is known that the natural or synthetic resources become scarce worldwide; that’s to say, insufficiency of drinking water and food are major expected problems for the future and family planning is the way to move forward. Moreover increasing the cost of living is another problem to be considered by parents themselves. Over all deteriorating quality of life such as education, healthcare, and transportation stress parents to work more to make sure good quality of life to their offspring. For example, parents need to earn more money to attach their children in private schools or to offer them a private car instead of using public transportation facility which has less quality.
Regarding to the impact on society, family planning has a great positive influence on household as well as the country. To begin with, from the parent’s perspective, it is easier to raise one or two kids with acceptable quality of living than having more children with weak foundation and no future. To illustrate, the money and effort needed for raising four children is doubled when the parent having only two kids therefore, the family having two kids with the same income can enjoy their life, and spend more on entertainment. In addition, from governmental perspective, services and facilities such as education, healthcare, infrastructure, and job opportunities can be offered in a good standard in countries with a low population. To simplify, it is a fact that countries with small populations such as UK, USA, and Canada offer better services for their citizens and residents than countries having large populations such as China or India.
In way of conclusion, family planning become critical issue worldwide because it can save the coming generations from the limited resources as well as relive the burden on both family and governments.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19266055046 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95884479248 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559633027523 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.568726637 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.5 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122258247419 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507306464675 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066756248615 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951451513605 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115163814618 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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