Many small town center shops are running out of business because rural residents tend to go shopping in big cities store. To what extent do the disadvantages of this development outweigh the advantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It has being observed that dwellers of suburbs tend to shop more from metropolis than from their town stores. Although shopping from large cities has several advantages, I am inclined to believe that the disadvantages are overweighted.
To embark with, shopping malls in capital cites can attract their customers by different ways which give benefits for consumers. One method is by building huge shopping centers which include all shopping stuff such as clothes, food, electronics, and other goods under one roof, and this makes choosing or comparing products easier and more convenient for buyers. Moreover, promoting goods in the form of price reduction or apply certain discount scheme is another way to attract more consumers even from the rural areas. For examples, offers such as one plus one are very convenient and it saves money as if two persons want to buy the same product, they can simply get it half priced.
On the other hand, the disadvantage of shifting the buyer to metropolis has a fatal effect on the suburb’s economy, as it will be imbalanced compared to big city. People have the desire to buy more with less cost and this will not be offered in town’s shops and as a result this would decrease the purchasing power in the countryside. To illustrate, the majority of people living in rural area tend to do their shopping in the weekend so they can buy their needs from far cities’ shopping malls in the sale seasons. Another point is declining the production of handicrafts because of lack of publicity, and as a result, their markets eventually get closed. Due to these disadvantages unemployment might be a great problem in countryside.
In way of conclusion, there are merits of shopping in large cities which saves consumer’s money as well as time, but- from my point of view- the demerits are more serious as it negatively influence the countryside’s economy, and diminishing traditional handicrafts.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'disadvantages'' or 'disadvantage's'?
Suggestion: disadvantages'; disadvantage's
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Message: Did you mean 'influences'?
Suggestion: influences
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09627329193 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94877534428 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9320762279 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.75 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192751234785 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711316909563 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439139460345 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112883425117 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384721958578 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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