In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
It has been noticed that, nowadays, newspapers are not being read by youngsters, because they are busy in pursuing their career and find that the news are not essential to them.
Reading or listening news from newspaper or television takes their time towards less employment news which can be used for towards another sector like education is being assumed by the adolescents. They think in the place of knowing about the other news except job offers they can use that particular time towards uploading their curriculum-vitae so, that they can get chance to settle their career. For example reading news take at least half an hour but, uploading a resume on some websites just take few seconds. Therefore, it seems reading the news is a useless activity.
As we know nothing is impossible, to create the interest of youngsters towards news, agencies should publish more employment news, so that who are near the age of working can read them and take advantage from that particular advertisement. Moreover people nowadays use smart phone so companies should create mobile applications of their channel which becomes the reading more easy for young people during travel and other important task. To illustrate, Danik Bhaskar nowadays start e-paper which do not need to save or people can open it at anywhere. Hence by these modern ways companies will success to create interest of reading news among youngsters.
Conclusively, young people take it as wastage of time and an ancient technique to get aware about society. With the existence of modern tools entrepreneur will success to raise their turnover by selling more and more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, moreover, second, so, therefore, at least, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14552238806 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63358832783 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589552238806 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2281680944 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.363636364 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167459843454 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690993557768 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0246361327565 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951709484037 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400984774902 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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