In today's rapidly changing globalized world, criminals and their mindset of nonstop involvement in crimes has become one of the pressing issue, requires immediate action. Under this topic will discuss about the reasons which might lead to this issue and what we could do to ameliorate the situation.
First of all, the main reason behind all the crimes are illiteracy and poverty. 90% criminal involve in crimes are because of lack of education and lack of money. Many criminals keep committing further crimes, even though they got big punishment still they are forced to go for further crimes. For instance, an uneducated poor man is already committed a crime and after releasing from prison he don't have anything to do as he don't have any knowledge, skills or money. Therefore that person is forced to join same path of crime.
The other important reason behind these continuous crimes is family support. Once that person is back from the prison, most of the families don't support them financially and morally. Hence to earn their bread and butter instantly they don't find any other way out except to choose the same path which they followed earlier.
In addition to this, myriad of people are criminals due to narcotics habitually. In most of the countries for easy earning money numerous of people gets involve in drug business. Therefore, along with spoiling their own lives, people start destroying others lives too.
in order to ameliorate the situation, with the help of government and laws, we can handle the situation before it become intactable. Government bodies should pass strict rules and have to make sure that people are following it. However it is not an easy task still with the help of each individual and government bodies we can take responsibilities to solve the issue. Government should also run some program in the prison, under which all the prisoners should get to learn some additional skills. Those skills will be prove as a great help for the prisoners once they will go out in real world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, still, therefore, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00406504065 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59651746919 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654471544715 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7438641299 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6923076923 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221612477145 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060618349761 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550756025132 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106234887805 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765478488277 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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