In many developing countries there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction What measures could be taken to prevent this

Essay topics:

In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?

Over the few years, there has been a sudden surge in the pollution amongst the developing nations. Poor quality of air and water is ubiquitous. This essay will discuss few issues related to contamination of natural resources and then will elicit certain viable solutions to protect it.

To commence with, the foremost problem is due to industries located under the circumference of the residential areas. Moreover, these industries release toxic gases and contaminate air and water which leads to health problems amongst the people. To illustrate, according to some scientific research it is being said that potable water will become scarce by the year 2050. In addition, re-development and renovation has made a pitfall situation. Residents are not prudent about the waste from marbles and cement which is being dumped in the water creating environmental pollution.

However, there are various ways to overcome the above situation and maintain a pollution free surroundings. Developing industrial areas in standalone locations which are far from cities as well as imposing a ban on disposal of garbage in water can attain some success. On the other hand, government can act stern and limit the construction activities depending up on the requirements of the people. For example, the municipal corporation of their respective cities can keep a watch over the number of constructions and restrict it if the level exceeds the average grant for the year.

To conclude, although there are innumerable reasons due to which the pollution has increased causing life-threatening diseases but being a little cautious can show immense change in the environment and it can also benefit the future generations.

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Average: 6.5 (4 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, in addition, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38059701493 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00813851153 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7905935138 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.923076923 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18608937246 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064979290809 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575682727524 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972182710172 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698242823116 0.056905535591 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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