Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists rather than local people.
Why does this happen?
What can be done to encourage local people to visit museums and historical sites?
The past few decades has seen a tremendous rise in the tourism industry in many countries. It is generally observed that tourists visit museums and historical sites more instead of its local people. Does not local people treasure the value of their heritage? This essay will put some light on the reasons behind this and will also suggest few solutions to change this trend.
People are normally very keen on travelling abroad and visiting different countries for holidays instead of discovering their own country. For many people, spending a vacation at an international location helps them to maintain a status in the society. Not all people are aware about the historical attractions of their own country and the history and knowledge behind it. Some people are of the opinion that local sites can be visited at any time but international holidays can be planned only during specific periods of the year. For instance, an Indian would choose Dubai over Taj Mahal as Dubai can be visited only during November to March, since at other times the temperatures are usually very high which is not recommended for tourism, whereas Taj Mahal can be visited at any time during the year.
Government should encourage local people to visit museums and historical sites by giving special discounts on entry fees of such sites for localities. They can also attract local people by providing them subsidised rates for hotel stay and for shopping at such sites. In addition, schools and colleges should not only educate the children about these local historical attractions but also conduct excursions and events at such museums and historical sites to generate awareness about our heritage in the minds of young people. Government and tourist industries can also advertise such sites on roadside hoardings and television channels to reach out to people about various tour options to visit these places.
To conclude, knowledge and awareness of local heritage should be raised amongst local people to visit museums and historical sites. This can be successfully done by spreading awareness through advertisements and educating students via schools and colleges.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19886363636 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62111085371 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519886363636 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8622909981 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434539482372 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160280979595 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123373856809 0.0667982634062 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284489475365 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533439711755 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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