Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Undoubtedly, the IT corporations approach customers to provide their confidential data in order to utilise services. Although this phenomenon has widen the user's reach to the ample softwears by offering multifarious online facilities, the threat of exaggerating cyber crimes can not be overlooked.
Seemingly, individuals of this ever-progressing information technological era have become the savy as they are euipped with feasible ameneties to lead a serene life. Advancement in information sector has enabled populace to amuse the variety of softwear at distance of small click which ensures the mandatory guidance to public regarding its operations. Moreover, clients get updated time to time with new updations in softwears which provide great assistance in thier work. To exemplify, in gone calender year Japan launched a virtue application in which artifical intelligency keep check on daily routine to serve the purpose it demands for neccessary personal information.
Even though life has been much easier than before, but the prejudices associated with the innovation are not justifiable at any ground. Granting permission to access the private data is not a prudent measure as it could be misutilised in unauthorised hands consequently, loss of privacy turns the scenario in untoward circumstances oftenly. Furthermore, sometimes availing the valuable details make people prone to terrible situations. It be biased to bypass the data published by National Cyber Centre stating that
in India almost 1500 cases of money transferring from debit cards by unapproved platforms are being registered monthly.
To conclude, demerits of the emerging trend is outweighing the merits owing to which supermacy need to enact stringent legislation to get tackle the menace and secure the reliability of softwears.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
Undoubtedly, the IT corporations approach customers to prov...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'widened'.
Suggestion: widened
... services. Although this phenomenon has widen the users reach to the ample softwears ...
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Line 3, column 498, Rule ID: CALENDER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'calendar', a system of organizing days? A 'calender' is a machine.
Suggestion: calendar
...ce in thier work. To exemplify, in gone calender year Japan launched a virtue applicatio...
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Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...people prone to terrible situations. It be biased to bypass the data published by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69485294118 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16367717468 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709558823529 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1129248592 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.818181818 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145937503889 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453273810084 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301778335541 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575941580233 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373222687959 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.56 8.58950901804 135% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.