Many people think that road safety will improve when government will decrease the speed limit,other people belive that there are other better ways of improving read safety.To what extend do you agree.
In recent times, safer travel has become one of the most controversial topic around the world. While reducing speed limit, can certainly, help to increase the protection, however, there are also other measures to improve the security.
To start with, the plethora of traffic mishaps are due to the over speed of vehicles, so it is obvious that when speed is controlled, automatically casualties will be decreased. Especially this benefits among the elder people, because this will force youngsters to drive in a medium speed, which is a greater relaxation for their parents. Moreover, less fuel will be burnt, leading the minimum pollution in the environment, which is an excellent sign for the pollutant-free surrounding. In addition, this will be useful to improve the longevity of the vehicle, by which means is an indirect profit for every individual.
However, there are also other effective ways, which can be followed to minimize the accidents in order to ensure the secured travel. The government can encourage by announcing awards for the citizen with no accident as well as who follows the rules. This automatically creates the awareness and boost among the public. Along with this , in spite of the age, a mandatory safe driving education course should be taken by every person,it can be helpful to understand have the knowledge about road rules,also can introduce self-discipline among every individual.
To sum up,definitely enacting the road rules will improve the protection during the road travel.Apart from this. the government should take other steps as well to control the issue.It is also the responsibility of every citizen to obey the traffic rules in order to detrimental situation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, in addition, as well as, in spite of, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9461688722 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586080586081 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.448907197 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.25 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146369131691 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566860819202 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486957990935 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944046682705 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418303052278 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.