Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the causes people do this. Do you think this is a good thing or bad thing?
Age is not just a number for countless people; in fact, it is an imperative parameter in our lives. Some people look older than their age while others younger. Yet a huge number of people give preference to look young due to numerous reasons. This essay will first outline a few very important causes for it, and then explain how this trend is completely impertinent.
To begin with, one of the most indispensable reasons is gaining employment opportunities and confidence. Most companies, these days, consider only those candidates as their prospective employees who are attractive, which are usually younger generation. Marketing manager, for example, depicts the profile of a company; therefore, companies prefer fresh people. Similarly, show-business is another area where this pattern is strictly followed. For all these reasons, looking younger is important for old people, so that they could further increase their working possibilities. Furthermore, old people are usually diffident and this has become a concept in our society, Therefore, people who are very conscious about their self-esteem, they attempt to look young to boost their confidence.
The above reasons are understandable but if factors, such as cost and success rate, are taken into consideration, they might seem impertinent. Cosmetic surgeries are quite expensive; people spend millions of dollars on it; however, very few are successful. For example, Couteney Cox, who is a famous actor from TV serial Friends, transformed her face to look young, but that transformation was a complete failure. As a result, her face deteriorated and lost her natural beauty.
In summary, bright job prospect are available for younger generation, but this does not mean that people should take any step to look younger. This is because of expenses involved in those procedures and does not necessarily always succeed. It is, therefore, recommended that people ought to avoid this trend and feel confident in their real age and appearance.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, similarly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in fact, in summary, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40127388535 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95941279004 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627388535032 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4563539585 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7647058824 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4705882353 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94117647059 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256678711838 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803953130872 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775074948828 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165639946074 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823202546189 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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