Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the causes people do this. Do you think this is a good thing or bad thing?
In this fast-paced world, everyone is trying to keep their outer demeanour as young as they can. People’s youngness not only affects their career in a positive way but also it strengthen personal relationship within their community.
Every business or job in this contemporary era requires good personality traits, which can be derived by looking younger. This situation eventually brings compulsion on oneself to look younger and perform well in their respective field of occupation. For example, Americans always believe in looking younger because they contemplated that youngness creates positive vibes and through these vibes they can achieve whatever they want.
Young people are also successful in creating a new relationship and sustain it in their respective surroundings. Some ethnic groups believe that people who looks younger are more exuberant than ordinary people, which is the major factor to become a successful person, particularly by creating and maintaining contacts. For instance, British citizens have the beliefs that people who look younger are more socialise and therefore the high achievers.
I believe that it is quintessential for individuals to look younger. This would benefit them in their professional as well as personal life in many ways. As per scientific reason such as spreading positivity and enthusiasm are the major reasons for believing in the said notion.
To deduce, there is no harm in looking younger and it step-up one’s life in every aspect of their life thus this is a very good idea to work upon their external demeanour.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Did you mean 'strengthens'?
Suggestion: strengthens
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42741935484 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89519498588 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600806451613 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7327022324 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.166666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2557950563 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998790854478 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416619876315 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141513695609 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190572441679 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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