Nowadays, people move from one country to another for work. Some people think children of these families suffer because of this, while others think it is helpful for them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this contemporary era, the world has become a global village and therefore people move from one country to another country in search of better opportunities. In this case, some people think that their family suffers because of assimilation in other cultures and different climatic conditions, while others believe that it would be a better option for their family to get better educational options for their children as well as exploring new financial horizons for the spouse.
Settling up in an unfamiliar country has been challenging in many aspects. One of the major concern for shifting is, whether their family can acculturate in a new country or not. Secondly, do other country’s climatic conditions severely affects infants and spouses health or not. Finally, trust and discrimination could be vital factors before taking this life-changing shift. For example, many people have been feeling disappointed after migrating to a foreign county due to unfavourable weather, discrepancies about foreign culture and thoughts. Nevertheless, there are some positive sides people needs to be considered.
Although there are countless problems, people still migrating overseas for better occupational opportunities. It is irrefutable fact that those who migrated and survived a hard time are earning handsome salaries. In other words, not only the first person of the family but also their spouses are earning good amount of money from their respected fields after enduring hardship for couple of years. Furthermore, children are also getting equality education and explore their skills to make a stable future. For example, nowadays, third world countries people are more inclined towards Canadian immigration. It is because this country welcomes migrants as well as give them proper opportunity to earn as per their forte. People have been migrating despite the horrendous atmosphere and mix-culture.
To deduce, after contemplating both the views I can say that if family members are tolerant enough to survive couple of years in the beginning then moving to the different country will be the golden opportunity in terms of getting valuable, respectful and highly paid job. Moreover, their children and other adult family members also would get better educational and field related opportunities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, third, well, while, as for, for example, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5395480226 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90552755889 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581920903955 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.5520063572 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.352941176 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6470588235 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350466721767 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972197093589 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071746024779 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209578929701 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977054427493 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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