Some people believe that in 100 years time life will be easier for the majority of people, while others are unsure about this.
What is your opinion?
Scientists are in the quest of making people’s life comfortable and easier. Taking this into the consideration many people believe that life will be more prosperous after century. However, some ethnic groups are uncertain about the same notion. I believe that automation would overrun this world within several decades and make people’s life comfortable, easier, luxurious and therefore enjoyable, but natural resource might get obsolete and global warming problems will greatly arise.
As technological interventions are entering into one’s life, they become more focused by not worrying about other life’s prospects. For instance, mobile devises help person to interact with professional as well as personal worlds. Additionally, it also helps people to reduce their monthly activities such as paying light bills, rents, and some shopkeepers payments. Moreover, invention like Artificial Intelligence and Machine Learning has been improving human life for couple of years. If people are getting so much ease now, I could not imagine, how life would be in next 100 years.
On the other side, it is foreseeable that the depletion of natural resources has touched the sky and it is hard to think for the people that what will be the scenario even after 10 years. For example, oil consumption is so fierce nowadays that government has officially said that it will run out after 10 years. Another reason is, global warming issues also climbed the limit, this welcomes natural calamities and ruining regional people’s life. In this state, uncertainty for several societies needs to take into consideration.
To deduce, I can say by contemplating both the viewpoints that life will surely becomes easier but without proper resources, it will be uncertain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49090909091 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89575579994 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654545454545 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3755868012 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328808939517 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107322960534 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496928824707 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193149946772 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428865283042 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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