No doubt, people use clothes to be comfortable and attractive historically and clothes have special role in our life. Base on this need clothes’ designers have been trying to create new clothes. In the past we wear clothes to protect ourselves from cold and hot weather and so on but unfortunately nowadays create a new clothes transform to an industry that on it selling amount is more important than quality. There is a competition between designers and industries to create fashionable clothes and customers’ wardrobe has been filled with useless clothes.
Firstly, it is obvious that need to wear suit clothes is one of essentials need of people all the times. To create acceptable and wearable clothes with low price we need some professional clothes’ designers and powerful industry so after industry revolution, especially during last century, a lot of clothes industry like Nike, Puma and so on founded.
Secondly, these days designers and clothes industry enter a competition called it ‘fashion‘. They frequently create useless new clothes and encourage people, especially women, to buy them. For example each year designers select a color and named it ‘year color’ and persuade people to buy clothes with this color and with this way they rip off customer’s money. Unfortunately many people involved in this game and they buy these new and in most of time they use them only one or two in social gathering and after that throw away them .
In nutshell, creating and wearing suit clothes is one of essentials need of human being. After industry revolution especially in last century creating clothes transform to huge industry. These days we deal with a big problem in this industry ‘fashion’ that lead to creating useless clothes and rip off and west customer’s money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 326, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean '(clothes)'?
Suggestion: (clothes)
...but unfortunately nowadays create a new clothes transform to an industry that on it sel...
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Line 3, column 558, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...gathering and after that throw away them . In nutshell, creating and wearing suit...
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Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... one of essentials need of human being. After industry revolution especially in last ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27303754266 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14379384987 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508532423208 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8664648643 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.846153846 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0832065981741 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382121027296 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278041811118 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0578531743305 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223564210293 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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