In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this?
Although the inflation of population has increased the need for new homes, the countryside is home to many people and animals. I believe that the countryside should be protected and new alternatives should be discovered to make up for increasing demand.
The countryside consists of lands of farmers who make a living by selling the crops grown in those fields, such as wheat, pulses, fruits etc. Building new homes will impact not only the amount of food produced, thereby affecting the economy of the country, but several farmers may lose their source of livelihood, adding more to the existing issues such as unemployment and scarcity of food. In addition, these fields also provide food and pasture lands for domestic animals.
Furthermore, the countryside also offers peaceful and serene atmosphere away from the hustle and bustle of the city life. Many people prefer to visit the countryside during vacations to spend quality time with family and friends, that they do not get to enjoy at other times such as activities like rowing a boat, fishing, feeding the animals, playing in the dirt, horse riding etc. The lush greenery and clean rivers helps rejuvenating the mind which in turn helps improve the heath, by reducing the stress and cleansing body of the pollution of the city.
In conclusion, the countryside is an important part of the community which benefits us in uncountable ways that goes unnoticed and we should make efforts to preserve it instead of using them up to build new homes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 425, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to rejuvenate' or 'rejuvenate'.
Suggestion: to rejuvenate; rejuvenate
...he lush greenery and clean rivers helps rejuvenating the mind which in turn helps improve th...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03585657371 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6441700122 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637450199203 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.4252186375 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.444444444 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23776548164 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871953010807 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772963584584 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137153349367 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707677523896 0.056905535591 124% => OK
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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