In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.What is your opinion about this?

Essay topics:

In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this?

Globalization and urbanization are demanding for a continuous construction to habitat people for its growth. Now, in order to accommodate for the growing population resulting from these factors, new houses and flats are required to be built in the countryside since this is the only space available for the expansion. Some proponents have a point of view that it is essential to preserve countryside, whereas, other prodigies advocate that it is necessary to support expansion.

There are myriad of reasons for avoiding construction in the countryside. One of the conspicuous reasons is that it will have a devastating impact on the ecosystem because the countryside facilitates natural habitat to various species. If new homes are constructed, then these creatures will go homeless and might even extinct. For example, Vashi in India, one of the favorable countryside provided shelter to various animals and birds. But, with the construction of new flats and skyscrapers, they were exiled or hunted to make space for humans. Plausibly, a colossal upsurge of such advancements will cause many animals to deplete and would have a detrimental impact on the food chain.

On the other hand, considering the limited space available for the expansion and higher construction cost in urban areas, the next favorable spot is somewhere distant from cities. This would enable sapients to purchase or rent accommodation at affordable prices. For example, Noida authorities in India shaped houses in Greater Noida, one of the closest countryside to Noida, so that the people working in the Noida city can stay there at reasonable prices. Moreover, it provided them living in an uncongested location and a healthy lifestyle.

To pen down the compendium, constructing new houses is the need of the hour. In my opinion, we should be flexible to embrace the change, and builders and authorities should sagaciously decide how much urbanization is reasonable for a countryside to maintain a right ecosystem balance.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then, whereas, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33123028391 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07822108913 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555205047319 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4524323226 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.666666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215347119682 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660114726432 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410780561471 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123326121397 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435321684813 0.056905535591 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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