Many students decide to further their study abroad. What are the benefits and drawbacks of studying abroad?
Nowadays, taking a year out to live and study abroad is becoming very popular. To many people, especially young adults the chance to spend an extended period of time overseas is an attractive one. However, there are both advantages and disadvantages in deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss some of the challenges and opportunities that we have to face when we are in overseas.
When we talk about the advantages of moving abroad for studies, one of the main positives of heading overseas is that it gives you the freedom and an opportunity to fulfil your dreams. What I mean by this is that you have the chance to meet new people from different cultural backgrounds and learn to cope with foreign customs and food. This can make you more satisfied personally. Secondly, moving abroad can lead to a better quality of life, for example, Australia and New Zealand are the most livable countries in the world due to economic, weather and especially multicultural societies. These countries have better plans to develop their countries and encourage a better work ethic to benefit people. In addition by studying overseas, you can obtain the best qualifications and language skills which you can’t probably get from your own country.
However, there are some disadvantages to living and studying in a foreign country. The main problem is that the people who move to a foreign country experience loneliness. In my experience, when I first moved to Australia to study I had to make money on my own for my university fees and I was studying and working virtually all the time. So I felt lonely and missed my family back in Sri Lanka. Furthermore, we have to learn a new language and always had to communicate with people from different cultures. Sometimes the weather is terrible in different seasons especially in winter which is the coldest season and it is really hard to work outside.
All things considered, starting a new life in a foreign country is never easy. You need to take both the pros and cons of your stride. To enjoy a better life with a decent job with luxury vehicles and houses you will have to face issues like culture shock and language barriers you have to grind your way to earn money to achieve your future goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, i mean, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 391.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80818414322 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68553647302 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516624040921 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7941468821 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9473684211 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5789473684 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136538773462 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394095046705 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503254387344 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802390579312 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496722084497 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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