Many wear like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

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Many wear like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

Nowadays wearing fashionable or trendy clothes is becoming increasingly popular. Fashionable clothes are preferred by many people these days. This essay will discuss why this is the case and whether it is a good thing or a bad thing.

The two main reasons behind this trend are the availability of cheaper clothes and people becoming more conscious of how they look. Because of the development in alternative cloth types, fashionable clothes are inexpensive. For instance, some shops sell replica of clothes worn by celebrities at affordable rates. Moreover, people are more focused on how they look and what they wear. It is considered by many that wearing fashionable clothes is a symbol of richness in society. Additionally, many people believe clothes reflect their personality, and wearing trendy clothes makes them look attractive. Based on a survey in India, people think clothes should never be repeated if one wants to be part of a high-class society.

Whether it is a good thing or a bad thing depends on your income and your perception of life. A family with low-income power will not be able to afford new fashionable clothes at all times. Even if they buy some, these clothes tend to be of low quality and do not last long. It will be a bad thing if such a family focuses on fashionable clothes over other necessities. For people who work in a creative field like modeling, tend to focus more on appearance, and the availability of cheaper fashionable clothes and growing popularity is an excellent development.

In conclusion, wearing fashionable clothes are more popular because of the availability of Cheaper options and changing views of society. Whether this is a good or bad change depends upon one's earning capabilities and lifestyle.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09278350515 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91215977094 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512027491409 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1300525921 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1764705882 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290918666022 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10612386086 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104886028971 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225372237304 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130319317379 0.056905535591 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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