It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is the best for the individual and for society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement.
Nowadays, marriage is no more a priority for people yet, it is believed that getting married by the age of thirty is beneficial to both individuals as well as society. I strongly agree with the statement and this essay will discuss why a person should tie a knot in his/her late twenties.
Marriage demands maturity, understanding, compromises and adjustments. Between the years of 25 to 30, a person experiences many life lessons, which makes them mature enough to take responsibility along with important lifelong decisions related to the family. Moreover, career-oriented Males and females, have established their career and are ready to settle with their soulmates by this age. Biologically, for women, it becomes difficult to conceive a child after she turns 30 years old, which in turn results in some hormonal imbalances and health issues. For instance, famous actresses are well known for adoption and surrogacy as they are unfit for childbirth owing to hormonal deficiencies- a repercussion of late wed-lock.
A successful courtship leads to a happy family. The community will be steeped with contended people if the wedding between two life partners is conducted at an appropriate age. To corroborate it, in a place like India, where marriages are not about two individuals but, it is about two families indulging in the relationship and celebrating the event to the utmost excitement. Although the open-mindedness of the modern world has allowed youngsters to have a long-term relationship or live-in relationship, the breakups of this lifestyle leave single lonely and depressed individuals resulting in a sad society.
All in all, in my opinion, motivating men and women to settle down by the age of 30 is not a bad notion. This will contribute to a happy individual and a joyful society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20890410959 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14241581633 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619863013699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9736951052 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219086461275 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638594292446 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515939172219 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123866496612 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631292043213 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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