International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment.
Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Tourism industry has flourished immensely within few years. Undoubtedly, a surge in trips across the world has contributed these places a lot, but a raising distress among residents regarding their homeland and surroundings has come to light recently. This essay will discuss various pros and cons of this trend and provide a conclusion in the end.
International tourism offers a lot of benefits. Firstly, development of rural area is an collateral advantage, particularly when a tourist place in under development. Secondly, there are certain places, whose only source of income is tourism. For instance, a hillstation Manali in India is unsuitable of any business setup, but the location has mesemerizing view and an amicable whether which often attracts visitors. As a result, the demand in hotels, restaurants and other places of entertainment for tourists will rise in these regions which in turn would contribute indirectly to the economy of the country. Thus, it becomes the silver bullet to earn from foreign finances.
On the other hand, it is inevitable to avoid the harmful impacts of the trip on local community and their villages. In certain scenarios, it is observed that the people have to suffer disrespect of their culture and traditions because of few notorious visitors. In addition, these backpackers and hikers are less likely to be concerned about cleanliness and spread rubbish on their way to heritage places, which compromises the beauty of the locations.
All in all, i think that despite some negative impacts, the merits of international tourism are far more compared to its demerits and so i completely disagree with the notion that the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, i think, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32727272727 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00658450958 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6356857843 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.692307692 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188582008462 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578580163068 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660099964733 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105098844377 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675546438177 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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