International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is undeniable that due to the influence of social media, the tourism industry experienced exponential growth. Owing to innovation and development in technology, it has become relatively easy and convenient to travel. Interestingly, the surge in international tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places, but people argue its impact on the local inhabitants and surroundings.
Firstly, the demand for tourism has brought in many making opportunities for the local community. Secondly, Industrialisation is not possible at every place due to geographical conditions, like Jammu and Kashmir; but such places are attractive for travelling. The island in Indonesia, Bali, is well-known globally for its beaches and water sports. Development of such places depends on the funds earned from tourism. Thirdly, when people travel from places to places, then only we can understand the cultural differences.
Nevertheless, an intense rise in the number of travellers has caused a detrimental effect on the environment and local population. Many people prefer staying or visiting the countryside for a serene environment; instead, it has become the opposite. Moreover, people visiting the remote places leave behind the carbon footprints causing a detrimental effect to the environment. Additionally, the plastic waste and one-time use products have increased to fulfil tourist demands; the plethora of toxic waste generated is difficult to decompose.
One of the famous tourist places in India is Goa. Lakhs of people travel yearly to enjoy vacation, parties and water sports. More than seventy-five per cent of the population in this city is tourism depended for livelihood. It has recently been noticed; the water is getting polluted because of waste dumped into the beaches. Consequently, marine life is affected, depreciating the fishing industry.
In my opinion, the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the benefits of it. Strict laws must be made to protect the environment and heritage of the nation. The hefty fine must be imposed for breaking the laws. If this continues, global warming could be more significant, affecting future generations.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60486322188 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16920283377 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601823708207 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6321489157 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8095238095 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297610395714 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773930824934 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10490009047 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148746018871 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778236488086 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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