Films and computer games which contain violence are very popular. Some people
believe they have a negative effect on society and so should be banned. Other people,
however, say they are just harmless and help people to relax. Discuss both these points
of view and give your own opinion.
Popularity of aggressive online games and dark movies has hiked recently. As believed by some the genre of these media are detrimental on community and they should be prohibited, while others consider them a mere relaxing activity with fun. I certainly opine that it is a negative trait and should not be promulgated. This essay will discuss both the views and explain why it is not a good idea to incorporate violence on digital platforms.
Children are the evident users of video games. It is very malicious that at a very young age they are exposed to games and movies containing guns and deadly weapons. Moreover, their minds grasp easily whatever they watch. Inspired from such evil contents many juveniles have been reported as felons. For instance, a software developer in her twenties had developed an online game which required the players to cut their wrists if they were unable to finish the game. The game claimed to take lives of many people and it was later banned by the government.
On the other hand, some individuals think that a violent picture or a gun fight in computer game provides them a relaxing effect. For example a game named PUBG has widespread players around the globe and is connecting people through game, providing a fun way to utilize free time. Also, various fights like sword fight or archery are some simple harmless sports involving a violent act yet safe and soothing. Moreover, if movies are made without villain and hero’s fighting scene, then it will be less entertaining to watch.
All in all, cinemas and computer games with vicious contents are harmful but it is inevitable to eradicate the violence completely from the digital medias as they are need to provide fun element. So it is advisable to keep a watch on how much amount of brutality is been watched and check if there are any platforms that require any restrictions.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8722741433 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56356955431 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629283489097 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.025987124 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.75 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312031021503 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797423335676 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512694863653 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159284266236 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602672848008 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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