Some people say that the Internet will soon become the preferred method of delivery of the news and information, causing the newspapers and magazines to gradually disappear. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and include examples from your knowledge or experience.
Today, many individuals prefer to read the news or collect information browsing through the internet, resulting in a fading future of the newspapers and magazines. Certainly, digital media have some perk but, I completely disagree with the fact that this raising popular trend will make the newspapers and magazines obsolete. This essay will discuss my argument further in detail.
Undoubtedly, surfing news updates on a mobile or a laptop is convenient, cost-effective and up to date. It is tedious to carry the newspaper or a magazine while travelling but, a handy cell phone or a device like kindle would provide same reading experience with less discomfort. Secondly, these gadgets are multi-purpose and there is no need to pay any extra money to download a news app or search an article, however, a fashion magazine or a science direct would sometimes cost a fortune. Lastly, these websites constantly get updated with the current news which is highly appealing.
Nevertheless, there are some downsides of using the internet too often. Firstly, with so much information sometimes it becomes hard to relay on a particular article. The verification of news becomes a requirement and consequently time consuming. Secondly, the screen time devoted to these digital gadgets increases which causes harm to eyesight.
On the other hand, reading a book or a periodical provides a sense of concentration. Also, the facts and figures written in them are true and corroborated with the tangible evidences. In addition, it is easy to ask the author or an editor to elaborate on their writing and learn some great information with their help which is not the case with web browsing.
In conclusion, it is true that the technology has take over the world of journalism but, it does not mean that the need of newspapers, periodicals, journals and magazines have to see an end.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'disagree that'.
Suggestion: disagree that
... media have some perk but, I completely disagree with the fact that this raising popular trend will make th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12052117264 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97304038212 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599348534202 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0766055374 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.8 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148799154738 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468768376371 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360561792019 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771674199987 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545896130498 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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