The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience
At present ownership of a car is a status quotient in society, resulting in a surge of private vehicles. In my opinion, use of public transport systems must be encouraged rather than travelling in personal automobile. This essay will discuss the impact of other modes of transportation over personal vehicles.
Daily commute has become a routine chore these days. The requirement of four-wheeler or a two-wheeler has become mandatory because atleast one family member in the house is bound to travel to his/her workplace. This results in increase in overall traffic in the urban areas of the country. In addition, large number of vehicles contributes to high amount of pollution which is a burning concern across the globe. Also, parking of cars and bikes, adds oil into troubled waters.
To overcome these problems, alternative forms of travelling shall be introduced. People should be persuaded to use more public transport by offering rewards and schemes. Collegues can share a cab or carpool is also a laudable approach. Moreover, inputs from the goverment officials is more effectual as people are bound to follow laws and policies. Introduction of such amendments will coerce individuals to reduce using car for short unnecessary trips. For instance, Delhi government introduced odd and even law for car usage, where an car owner according to his/her number plate is divided into specific days on which they are allowed to use cars.
In conculsion, I completely agree that using a personal vehicle is detrimental to society to a great extent over the time and emphasis on use of buses and trains should be encouraged to tackle to problems of the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f a car is a status quotient in society, resulting in a surge of private vehicles...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...d odd and even law for car usage, where an car owner according to his/her number p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13602941176 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85475751384 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639705882353 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1098205977 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217891179277 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607376986289 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523774262101 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120759562098 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055550294834 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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