Modern cultures around the world have become similar as compared to the past. What are the main reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development?
Cultures play a vital role in societies’ advancement also they are full of valuable life lessons that have been passed down from our ancestors. As a result of passing time, cultures might be changed.
There are a lot of reasons which need be taken in to consideration. Firstly, modern cultures lead to overcrowding the fast pace of life. Since most people have a tight schedule and they are less likely to spend some quality time with their family or friends, they prefer to change their lifestyle and such as the past cultures they enjoy whole moments of their life. For instance, in the past cultures people gather together on a regular basis. Secondly, past cultures reflect the lifestyle of people who live in a particular era. In fact our origins are stayed alive. Since nowadays most people try to respect their origins and ancestors’ behavior, they are more likely to follow past cultures.
From my point of view this changing is a positive development because cultures repeat themselves. Consequently people can learn about the mindsets of ancestors and find a sense of identity. Furthermore, children who are raised with such cultures have great originality. Another positive effect is that, people who follow past cultures can take full advantage of valuable life lessons since past cultures provide a unique learning experience.
In conclusion cultures regardless of modern or past are part of our heritage. We should treat our heritage with respect and dignity and do not forget next generation will learn from this culture. As a result, we should preserve our culture heritage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10687022901 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66047783291 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572519083969 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0065099752 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.625 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200750620683 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715180175356 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497028325791 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116746653786 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401165032607 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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