You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
Explain why you would like the job
Give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Dear Mr/Mrs
I have seen your advertisement in a magazine and I am writing to you because I would like to be considered for the position you are offering. I really would like to work for you because I think it will be a good experience for you and me. I like to travel, know about different cultures and meet new people. I have never been to Australia but I am pretty sure there a lot of things to see and try. I have previous experience looking after children. Currently I am working for an Irish family and I take care of four children whose ages vary from three to eight. I have to say that I have never thought that looking after children would be that rewarding. I enjoy spending time with them and I have learnt a lot. I am really patient, tidy, reliable, and hardworking.
In addition, I have just completed a first aids course.
If I had a chance to live with you, would be great. I would spend my free time learning English, visiting tourist attraction, trying local food and making new friends.
Thank you for taking time to read my letter. Please feel free to contact me if you need further details and recommendations.
Kind regards,
Bahare past
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 309, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...different cultures and meet new people. I have never been to Australia but I am p...
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Line 2, column 399, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e there a lot of things to see and try. I have previous experience looking after ...
^
Line 2, column 713, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...time with them and I have learnt a lot. I am really patient, tidy, reliable, and ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45327102804 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60194787855 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598130841121 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6537389385 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5333333333 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2666666667 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347919083959 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103331065654 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966499566495 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165876069469 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10031321751 0.0580467560999 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.