Some people hold the view that a good teacher is more important for education success while others think the student’s attitude is more important to succeed in education. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is clear that good teacher plays a vital role in one’s achievement also they can have major positive effects on students’ advancement in education. While education success depends on students’ effort, perseverance and motivation.
On the one hand, there are a lot of reasons which need be taken in to consideration about the importance of good teachers in education success. Firstly, since students spend a sizeable amount of time in school with teachers especially in primary level, they are very likely to choose teachers as a role model. Therefore, students can benefit from their teachers’ behavior. Secondly, good teachers try to encourage their students to obtain higher qualification, regardless of facilities shortage or lack of having access in deprived areas. Thirdly, good teachers can broaden students’ horizons also they provide a unique learning experience. Thus, students learn about the mindset of their teachers.
On another hand, since person’s behavior is a decisive factor in way of thinking, good teachers are less likely to be effective in education achievement. Firstly, students who do not have a flair for education might do not take full advantage of good teachers because they may be like to enjoy another field. Secondly, students hardworking leads to their success even if they have good teachers in schools, they follow their own way.
In conclusion, although good teachers have significant effects on education success, the students’ treat is undeniable. From my point of view, people who study hard in school and university, will have strong credentials in the future. Moreover they will have greater career opportunities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94128690186 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.075345847 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.214285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23411142986 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0920572448003 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537699174398 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152684932073 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104863205823 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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