You have just returned from holiday and were not satisfied with your trip. Write to the travel agency. In your letter
Say where / when you went on holiday
Explain why you are not satisfied with your holiday
Tell them what you would like them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing about the holiday trip that I passed one week ago to Turkey with your travel agency service.I would like to mention that I was not satisfied and I could not enjoy my trip how I imagined.I excpected your quality of services is perfect because my friends adviced me.
I would like to explain why I am not satisfied with your holiday.Firstly, the fligt time was changed before trip and your organazer informed me just one day before the trip, it caused to decline my doctor appointement also I became upset a lot.Secondly, the service of hotel and my room was awful.In addition, my room was dirty.
I hope you would consider this problems and have a solution for them. I recommend that check all the time flight, hotel location and another options one week before the trip. I wish my request is valid and logical enough to draw your attention and I would apperciate if your team compensated.
I am looking forward to answering my letter soon.
Yours faithfuly,
Bahare Past
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: I
... Turkey with your travel agency service.I would like to mention that I was not sa...
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Suggestion: I
... could not enjoy my trip how I imagined.I excpected your quality of services is p...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... could not enjoy my trip how I imagined.I excpected your quality of services is p...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...erfect because my friends adviced me. I would like to explain why I am not sati...
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Suggestion: Firstly
...hy I am not satisfied with your holiday.Firstly, the fligt time was changed before trip...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
... appointement also I became upset a lot.Secondly, the service of hotel and my room was a...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... service of hotel and my room was awful.In addition, my room was dirty. I hope y...
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Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... was dirty. I hope you would consider this problems and have a solution for them. ...
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Line 7, column 176, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...other options one week before the trip. I wish my request is valid and logical en...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... apperciate if your team compensated. I am looking forward to answering my lett...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74157303371 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64412844343 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623595505618 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.818000814 44.8134815571 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.571428571 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 4.34317383033 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289034186045 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119849016161 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773004688549 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147004387694 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872231634521 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 8.62886597938 324% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.