Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access to and exchange of information. Far from being beneficial, this is a danger to our societies.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this modern era, innovations in technology has allowed people to have access to quick and unlimited information. However, some people think that apart from advantageous, it has more negative impacts on our society. In my opinion, to a certain extent I agree that modern technology has negative impacts, but, I also believe that benefits of technology outweigh its disadvantages.
It is true that advanced development in technology has allowed people to have access to unlimited information and databases over the internet, but the negative impact of this access cannot be denied. All companies and governments use computer technology to store and maintain their key information these days. All banks have given online access to their customers to do online banking. If the access to this critical information is granted to any random person, the information can be misused. For example, the hacker might hack any banking account and use credit card information to steal money. In another case, the hacker might steal some secret information from the governments and sell it to terrorists.
Despite all the threats, there are numerous benefits that easy access to information has given us. To start with, many scientists and researchers have been benefited with this easy access of information over the internet. For instance, there are many research papers and studies available on the internet that can be referred by scientists for their ongoing projects. Secondly, students have been largely benefited as they get a lot of study material over the internet in the form of e-books, videos etc which they can refer to while studying. For example, students can find very entertaining and interactive videos related to their course of study on youtube.com which help them learn faster.
In conclusion, I agree that there are numerous benefits to human to have access to information over the internet, but to certain extent this is dangerous as well. I personally believe that the government should have a strict regulation about the access and design a proper control system which would prevent the misuse of the information.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27192982456 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81123586549 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502923976608 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2372238945 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.6875 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185885543351 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689540384204 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630369452842 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131534943173 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691426099662 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.