Space exploration is one of the most expensive program, that is being carried out by most of the developed countries across the globe. Many people argue that the governing authorities are spending huge amount of money in space research program, and instead that money should be used to support special services at schools and hospitals. I agree that, the government should invest more in public services, but the benefit of space research has provided a wide range of technological solutions.
One of the biggest breakthrough that has happened because of space research program was regarding the development of fast flying aeroplanes and less usage of fuel. Many such important inventions are there because of ongoin research in space exploration.
Every year billions of money is invested in sending rockets carrying satellite to the outer space and also some research equipments as well as food supply to the international space station. One more important invention that has been seen to mininize the cost in sending food products is invention of 3D printers. This has leveled down the weight of rocket that carries cooked or prepared food, to just carry raw materials, which also requires less space.
On the other hand people argue that government should use the money wisely by providing more benefit to the general public in terms of educating and health care, instead of using that money in space research. This can be argued fairly that, the research has helped the general public with Lots of new innovative technologies which cannot be neglected.
In conclusion, government should continue with the space research program, however the education and health department shall not be neglected and should be given equal priority.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...quires less space. On the other hand people argue that government should use ...
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Suggestion: public
...wisely by providing more benefit to the general public in terms of educating and health care, ...
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Suggestion: public
...airly that, the research has helped the general public with Lots of new innovative technologie...
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Message: Use simply 'innovative'.
Suggestion: innovative
... helped the general public with Lots of new innovative technologies which cannot be neglected....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, regarding, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25357142857 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66120800788 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560714285714 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.4126634389 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.727272727 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215557212329 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887593539998 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588944513391 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126075036292 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680233175132 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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