More and more money is being invested in preventative care. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this approach.
A considerable number of people assert that diverting resources towards prevention serves a noble purpose. Others, on the other hand, are adamant opponents of the aforementioned view, claiming that we should pay more attention to cure. As far as I am concerned, the underlying advantages and disadvantages inherent to the brought forth prompt must be pondered upon prior to coming up with a firm conclusion.
On the one hand, there may be advantages galore to stressing prevention as a feasible medical practice. For one thing, it is a cost efficient approach since all it takes is avoidance in certain circumstances and making correct judgment calls in others. Furthermore, prevention is, oftentimes, hassle-free. For example, not allowing a barber to use a razor when he is giving a haircut may seem like a trivial decision to make. However, this very same decision can be tantamount to a life-saving choice.
On the other hand, prevention alone doesn’t guarantee anyone an illness free life. So, I personally tend to believe that being primarily focused on prevention will not only leave countless people at risk but will also lead to exacerbating the field of medical research. Take, for instance, an HIV positive child born to an HIV positive mother. It is unanimously agreed upon that no form of prevention can help a child born to an HIV positive mother. Hence, by ignoring cure and stressing prevention we will be depriving this innocent child of a chance to live.
To synopsize, I am of the opinion that despite the advantages inherent to prevention is tantamount to ignoring the very foundation of medicine based upon an immaculate combination of prevention and cure. Besides, many illnesses, as analyzed above, cannot be fully prevented.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, for one thing, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16433566434 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05698602838 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601398601399 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9565154805 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212029419626 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630054320196 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394406043192 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118611699986 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200404312472 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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