More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
In recent day, migrating to the metropolis in earning a better life has become a publicity recognized phenomenon. Although there are some drawbacks of migrating to cities, the government could do much more to ensure the urban condition for citizens.
On the one hand, it is true that movement from the countryside causes several problems and put pressure on the large cities. First, the cost of living is likely to be much higher than that of a small town or village as citizens have to pay more for transport, housing or even food. Second, by increasing population day in day out, cities witness a higher level of social evils such as crime and poverty rate. Moreover, migrating is at the expense of the environment, especially air pollution from a machine’s processing and garbage from human activities. For instance, Bangkok, the capital city in Thailand, recently are suffering from the toxin in the atmosphere due to the burden from the rising in the number of immigrants.
On the other hand, the government should take steps to measure these problems to ensure that people have the chance to enjoy a better life. First, if the government invest more in the infrastructure of affordable and social housing, the poorer can benefits from reducing the cost of living. In addition, in order to protect cities’ environment, authorities would enact laws to ban the vehicles in center cities and promote the usage of public transport systems to deal with air pollution and traffic congestion. Another solution is that the government could relocate the buildings including offices, schools or hospitals from urban to rural areas. In facts, nowadays, many universities with thousands of students are being moved to the suburb, far away from the center, which helps to reduce the major pressure of large city
In conclusion, migrating brings a lot of extremely difficult to the metropolis either material or immaterial aspects. However, governments could implement various measurements to tackle these problems.
Comments
The migration of city life…
The migration of city life keep increasing all around the world regardless of which country an citizens is.
We cant deny that city life has both advantages and disadvantages in human life.
City life creates better standard of living in terms of more jobs in the job market to provide for themselves and families.
Entertainment also plays role in city life because everyone in some way loves entertainment whether its club,restaurant or movie threatre.
As much moving to city because of entertainment may sound rather harsh but many young people now adays leave because of they find urban living borings.
Famous Universities are located in cities where student can pursue their studies for their dream jobs which is not provided in urban area.
Cons that living in the cities would be over crowded because thats where job market is and having some sense of relaxation.
Urban life gives sense of peace away from crowds which at the same time is advantage to us because of potential virus that you may contact such as Coronavirus which is cause of close social contacting.Yes road are wider but how much of transportation there is for the urban life.
Government need to step their feet in making urban small city for its people.Once providing the necessity that matters to people,then society dont need to go city life just for providing for their family or entertainment.
Global pollution is an important aspect that every one should considered.
Better infrasture means opportunities in both cities and jobs created to suit an individual dreams and wants.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, second, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22085889571 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86489273324 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592024539877 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0116054414 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.923076923 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264189899224 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801104403062 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552641481145 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153491477561 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726491804314 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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