More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine.
Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the
natural movement of workers around the world.
Do you agree or disagree?
You should write at least 250 words.
Skilled immigrants moving in to developed countries are becoming increasing popular. However, some people believe that, skilled labors are migrating to fill vacancies and its part of usual movement while, others believe that , such immigration is a channel for rich countries to steal skilled labors from poor countries.
In my opinion, I certainly agree with both their views and this essay will discuss on both categories and provide possible evidences behind it.
On the one hand, the skilled workers are invited across developed countries like Canada, Australia and so on. There are essentially two major reasons. Firstly, Earning potential high income in rich countries rather than being paid less in home countries is a vital factor. Based on their skilled ,they are provided with higher salary plus other benefits. second important factor is that, their standardisation of living in developed countries have increased significantly competitive to their native country. The recent survey from Australian Immigration System reports that all around 2 lakh immigrants recently migrated to their country in last 3 years.
On the other hand, immigration seemed to be an excellent system for rich countries to examine talents outside of their country . However, there are two main exploitation happening as a result of this .Firstly, the skilled workers are becoming gradually reduced in their native countries. Secondly, this will also have a potential impact in their economic growth of their home countries. Recent survey from software association group called NASCOM predicts that by 2025 there will be huge demand or shortage of resource in the fields of Artificial Intelligence, Data science skilled labours.
In conclusion, I would reaffirm that, both the above factors equally contributes to its cause and effect. Although, the immigrants gets benefited in their specialisation in rich countries while their native country still lose their talents.
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...ly contributes to its cause and effect. Although, the immigrants gets benefited in their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77951879809 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603333333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8262034905 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195492896233 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651360214176 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0797264414592 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11623532254 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989540670045 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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