More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why?
Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Undoubtedly, a cultural change has shifted the current generation to consider having children at a later age when compare to the past. In this short essay, the advantage and disadvantage of having children at a later age of female will be discussed.
There are some predominant reasons for this. To begin with, female born in the 80s and 90s, are provided with equal opportunities as males. Educations are provided to female compared to the past which lead to independent thinking. Further, younger generations on average are getting married at a later age to that of previous generations. This is mainly due to young generations start their career in their 20s and are more focus on their career progression, leaving the decision to form a family in their 30s. The economy of nowadays play a key role in such decision. There is a research in Hong Kong that at least 4 million Hong Kong dollars are required to raise a child nowadays. Many will fear of not able to provide a good living standard to their children. Leaving the decision to have children once they are financially stable. Financially stable family could provide good living standard and educate the children to be a model citizen is one of the most beneficial advantage of having children at a later age.
On the downside, the most clinical outcome that is noticeable, is the trend of couples struggling to become parents once they decide to form a family. Infertility rate amongst couple in the past has increased. Growth in technology has seen people are living a longer life. There is currently a growing imbalance of aged people against young children. Yet there’s also technological developments have been seen in helping couples to be fertile and form a family at later age. Therefore, the social impact could not be fully identified of having children at later age.
To summarise, it could not be determined the social impact of parents having children at a later age. Couples nowadays has the opportunity to live their desire live whether it is to pursue their careers or forming a family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, at least, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92307692308 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76537959261 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495726495726 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8834312395 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.55 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344496612102 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101000164932 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777245493263 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230269347089 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585747465218 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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