Most people accept that we now live in a globalized world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalization a positive or negative development?
In a few decades, with the advent of technology, the world has been globalized. A section of people believes that it is highly beneficial for them while others oppose this opinion. I think globalization leads to more benefits in every sector of life but its negative effects cannot be neglected.
To begin with, The first big advantage is that globalization has to lead to several educational opportunities which resulted to open a number of new universities and research institutes. To illustrate, Nowadays, most of the students from Punjab, India go to foreign countries for their higher studies. Apart from this, owing to the globalization, a tremendous boom has been experienced in the business sector. In recent times, a variety of business has been established throughout the world, due to which, several new job opportunities have been opened in the world market. It directly affects the economy of nations which definitely increased In the previous years. Moreover, this globalization also assists peeps to make their work hastily and effectively within a short time span.
Although globalization provides numerous advantages to people, it also boosts up the crime rates across the globe. Nowadays, criminals have several options to commit a crime and escape. To exemplify, Owner of Kingfisher airline, Vijay Mallya did a huge fraud with the Indian banks and then easily left India and settle somewhere in other countries. In addition to this, globalization have adverse effects on the traditions and cultures of a particular region which destroy owing to various aspects such as local languages of several regions are dying and English is becoming a global language.
In conclusion, globalization is more essential for the future perspectives to raise the economy and living standard of people of the world. Additionally, security agencies should be more alert against negative aspects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The proper name in singular (India) must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be more alert against negative aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, while, apart from, as to, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3779264214 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00068037758 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622073578595 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2566017284 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.2 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199230820364 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594806444047 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489090550351 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124620752232 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245517818301 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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