Most people accept that we now live in globalized world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalization a positive or negative development?
Globalization means that in some ways people around the world are becoming more and more similar. We often eat same food, wear the same clothes, watch the same TV programme, listen to the same music and even speak in the same language. Some of these atleast can be blamed on the spread of multinational brands available all over the world. However, this system have positive results which are followed with some negative concepts.
Firstly, the positive results of globalization are, most of the people are attracted for wide opportunities in their home country as well as in abroad. So, most of the foreign countries such as Europe are attracting peoples from other nations to feed their technologies. Secondly, poorer nations taking this as advantage and they are supplying labor for the richer nations. So that, they can create a good bond with them, which is very helpful to establish foreign companies in their country and also useful in the time of wars. As we living in a globalized world no one will feel isolated when they went to new country. Because, they do not need to habitat new habits and to learn new language.
On the contrast, people are showing interest to learn international language than the local language. And, the people who went to different countries are forgetting the traditional values of own country. By seeing them, local people are inspiring and giving more importance to foreign cultures than the own country values. As a result most of the people are forgetting about the traditional values and their cultures. If it continues the next generation effects a lot.
To conclude, globalization has both positives and negatives. So, government have to take action to protect countries identity and culture. It have to educate the society about traditional values and they have to encourage people to talk in national language, wear national clothes. But, to keep our country values safe is our responsibility and government can't succeed it without the help of the people.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'such as', 'as a result', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224324324324 0.247107183377 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.162162162162 0.155533422707 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.121621621622 0.0946595960268 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0351351351351 0.0501214627716 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0486486486486 0.0437548338989 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110810810811 0.122226691241 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0405405405405 0.0403226058552 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71465159777 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0432432432432 0.0326793684256 132% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.1 0.0861772015684 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00810810810811 0.021408717616 38% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0108108108108 0.011925033212 91% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2013.0 1933.35771543 104% => OK
No of words: 333.0 316.048096192 105% => OK
Chars per words: 6.04504504505 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.363363363363 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.273273273273 0.28420135186 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198198198198 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132132132132 0.137316102897 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71465159777 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.037074148 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54954954955 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 59.2069896649 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.5263157895 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1073328629 49.517814964 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.947368421 127.492653851 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.684210526316 0.814263465372 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 44.8536431168 49.1944974215 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.52747252747 1.69124875643 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166906919334 0.332605444948 50% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132867253274 0.102741220458 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0798695723537 0.0668466124924 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.523956601101 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134037764602 0.148594505496 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670725881366 0.134430193775 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397107318802 0.0742795772207 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.344640818422 0.324371583561 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0461317210825 0.0638462369009 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115859200435 0.228012699653 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403227640822 0.058150111329 69% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 5.90881763527 186% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.