Most people believe that the best way to spend holidays is by going abroad, staying at a hotel and enjoying the local attractions. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.
Travelling and exploring places has always been a desire of humans. It is believed by a certain section of people that the excellent ways to spend holidays is by going overseas and staying at a hotel and enjoy local attractions. I agree that it is the best way to spend our vacation with our loved ones. This essay will elucidate this statement with supporting information in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, there are numerous benefits to explore foreign country. Firstly, people can learn new culture by mingling with local people. This is a great opportunity to broaden their horizons. Secondly, masses can learn new language as well which will help them in the near future. Furthermore, individuals can enjoy scenic places of that country and by visiting monuments and museums they get to know about history of that particular nation. To cite an example, a study conducted by The Times of India reveals that 58 % people are interested to go abroad to relax. Moreover, there are many activities which are not available in home country such as Scuba-diving, marine diving, and para gliding are popular in Asian countries. As a result, people from all over the world attracts towards Asian countries to enjoy these activities. It is rightly said that visiting overseas is always a unique experience in holidays.
Thus, it is fair to conclude that even though spending free time abroad is challenging due to financial problems and some trivial changes such as language, food, and culture but it is a different experience which you never get in own country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00381679389 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71008521456 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62213740458 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6542904684 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6428571429 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27096518018 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769606502544 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906152459274 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177112027882 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121318718757 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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