News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. what is your opinion about this?
TV shows and newspapers provides virtual reality these days. You can know what's happening in every corner of world just by sitting at your home. In earlier days media also played vital role in spreading awareness but these days it not just provides overview but also provides complete information in depth. So how media is able to achieve this?
Nowadays along with story they provide pictures and small videos of event. As there us a saying pictures speak more than words. Having these photographs of event occurred or may be images of how the incident took place will give more, broader idea to audience, For example, pictures or posters of movie gives more idea to people whether the movie will be good or not, whether the characters playing the role will justify it or not. Also to give it a second school of thought, not just pictures but colored pictures gives even more impact. Human brain will store pictures very easily and for longer time than text.
Survey says that pictures shown for any unlikely event gives deep sorrow to its readers even when they are sitting thousands miles away. In my opinion, we must have pictured in news or television shows. Also it is said that in near future videos are going to take over images which may give more impact to intensity. Such days are not far when you will see this evolution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...irtual reality these days. You can know whats happening in every corner of world just...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ide pictures and small videos of event. As there us a saying pictures speak more t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the incident took place will give more, broader idea to audience, For example, p...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...laying the role will justify it or not. Also to give it a second school of thought, ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...e pictured in news or television shows. Also it is said that in near future videos a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70212765957 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15772796019 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6934440464 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232017707427 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085445723094 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062321596764 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135106170127 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376354262805 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.