Norway's, many people work part or full time from home. Some people say that working from home has many benefits while others disagree. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Essay topics:

Norway's, many people work part or full time from home. Some people say that working from home has many benefits while others disagree. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

In recent days, people are interested to do the job from their residence than the office. I do agree with this notion. This essay will explain the advantages and disadvantages of this particular issue.

Majority of the people are willing to do work from home as they can manage both family and office at the same time. The most important benefit of this is the mental and physical stress and strain can be avoided and due to this, the employee can do better. Another important fact is that the attrition rate can be reduced in the organization. As a result, the cost of recruitment can be brought down so that the organization can be benefited.

In addition to this, the employee can avoid traveling. Nowadays, traveling will take most of the time due to traffic. This traveling time can be effectively used for attending the client as well as completing the target. Moreover, environmental pollution can be avoided by the less usage of the vehicle which we use for transportation.
Nevertheless, the major disadvantage of work from home is the hike and promotions. The employer may fail to analyze the employee's performance of the employee in a systematic way and the employee may not be evaluated based on their qualification and experience as for how they analyze a regular employee in the office.

In addition to this, the organization's culture is one of the most important factors which may not be understood by the employee. The organizational culture is of the most important fact for the employee's carrier which can lead a major role in the performance of an employee. Due to this, the candidate can lose the chance of interacting with people. The organizational culture can motivate and make understand the employee about the employer effectively.
In conclusion, I believe that the work from home is an added advantage for the employees to manage family and work at the same time.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 121, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...s. The employer may fail to analyze the employees performance of the employee in a system...
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Line 6, column 159, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a systematic way" with adverb for "systematic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e employees performance of the employee in a systematic way and the employee may not be evaluated b...
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Line 8, column 195, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...e is of the most important fact for the employees carrier which can lead a major role in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, as for, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91304347826 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98621500155 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453416149068 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4032199977 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8888888889 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116434788062 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487768588031 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861360617161 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081123473549 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698996043012 0.056905535591 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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