The mark of a successful person is to be wealthy and have a successful career.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Defining the success of life is a very difficult approach. Most people think that indication of success in a person life is measured by the amount of money they earn and based on their professional growth. In my opinion, measurement of success is a subjective issue which merely does not depend on the money and the job they hold. However, they are many other factors depends on the successfulness of a person.
Primarily, a person can be said to have succeeded in life if they are, for the majority happy in their life.
This does not necessarily require a vast amount of money and a highly paid job in a multinational company. It can derive from family and friends, even being associated with the community we live in. For example, a rich person cannot accomplish the satisfaction in life if he is lonely and does not contribute to the community.
In addition, success can be measured by meeting or exceeding the set goals in our life, this does not directly depend on the bank balances or by holding a senior post in the workplace. For example, people who are climbing mountains or sailing solo across the sea, these achievements do not have any direct relation with the money or job, yet they can consider this as a positive achievement in their life.
However, to objectively measure success, wealth and career are two indicator factor that can mostly compare between people, so to some extent, they can be considered as factors for success, even though these do not provide any happiness, we could derive from the relatives or friends or by the feeling that we get from the relationship of our society.
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To sum up, money and profession are the two easier indicators for measures of success; they are not as significant as factors such as happiness and the achievement of one’s own goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78025477707 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75015628071 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528662420382 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.3216586015 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.083333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165917611122 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680863527092 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353126861425 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09418780677 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313495534044 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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