Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
With the advancement in technology, cooking food has become quite simple and convenient. In my
opinion, it has enhanced people’s lifestyle to great extent.
Undoubtedly, any person can easily coon with the help of modern equipments, however it has lead
to consumption of more electricity as that compared with past. For instance, the light bill for house
with all advance machinery is about 10,000 per month. Thus this is unaffordable for most of the
average earning person in the country.
Moreover, the merits associated with it can not be overlook. Firstly, any cuisine can be prepare at
own place with the aid of modern electric machine. Consequently, it has reduce the time that was
consumed earlier in cooking food. Now both the parents who are working can prepare food within
short span and can maintain a good balance between personal and professional life.
In addition to this, it has saved a good amount of money, which were spend on the restaurants and
cafes for different type of food, which were difficult to cook at home. Also, people are now moving
toward healthy and balanced diet to get a healthy and fit body. All the modern technology help to
prepare nutrient filled food at an ease. For example, different types of salads and smoothies which
are rich in vitamins and minerals are prepared easily and at own place.
To recapitulate, in this modern era of technology, cooking has become as easy as it was for the chief.
Thought electricity consumption has profusely raised but it has also cut down the fund spend on
outside food and saves ones time to maintain equilibrium between personal and professional life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, as for, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03623188406 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71463628457 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572463768116 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0875939398 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107429064948 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404458990662 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352173792056 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0347115129023 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386906268191 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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