You work for an international company. Recently your job changed and you believe that more training is needed. Write a letter to your manager and say
How has your job changed
Deceive a type of training you will need
Suggest the arrangement incorporating training and your work
Dear Mr. Tim,
I am writing this letter just to ask for your support as I have recently joined business management department and further training is required for me for better understanding of the profile.
Previously, I was working in marketing department and two months back came across about the vacancy in business management through internal transfer policy. I had always wanted to work in corporate department so applied and got appointed for the job.
As my job profile has drastically changed from on filed to corporate management, so I believe some training programs or certified courses which provide good insight about the job will enhance my efficiency.
There are few short term courses as well as off site training organized by renowned institutions in the city which aid to gain basic knowledge on business management. The certified courses on weekends for 6 months and the external training are once a month on week days. I seek your cooperation in allowing me for certified course or training whichever is convenient as per work load of my job.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Hima Kacha
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 14, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom you. Yours sincerely, Hima Kacha
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11170212766 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84237223115 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654255319149 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.456701051 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.777777778 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305019379355 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11323624538 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551080194385 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141590754213 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382763405103 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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