Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The tourism industry has vast significance globally and, nowadays tourists from different countries travel along various nations to spend their vacations or for other purposes. However, some people criticise it and believe it creates conflict among guests and natives host than mutual understanding. I disagree with the statement up to some extent because no doubt, some misunderstandings can occur but this also strengthens the bond of countries.
On the one side, tourism helps people to know about the culture of different nations. When visitors visit another country then, they come to know about the costumes, culture and food habits of the host country by involving with them. Which helps to promote the culture of that country, it is important because promotion helps to keep the things alive. Jaipur is the city of Rajasthan state in India and some decades ago no one knew about it, as an instance, but due to the increased tourism, currently, it becomes the eminent tourist site because of its distinct culture.
On the dark side, many tourists don't respect the culture and religion of the alien country, it happened just because of an unknown to the culture of that place and sometimes intentionally so, it cause Jeopardy paradise to natives and cause misunderstandings among them. Once a time, a person was warned due to disrespect of the religion in Tirupati, because of he went temple along with a beer bottle, but when habitants told him about their ethics then he apologised. Hence, misunderstandings can be sorted by instructing the values culture and religion to the foreign people.
To conclude, although tourism bring some conflict, yet there are various positive sides of this trend. The Government should manage committees where they should be taught about the culture of the host country before they entered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19463087248 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77490605227 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590604026846 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1541518535 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11346314555 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464791849088 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456780540407 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732893736594 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573286057334 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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